Revisions

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Here is a summary of my first Wiki submission on June 15th from Ms. Fike.

 * Home - I like that it was simple and to the point; easy to read for elementary students.
 * Professional Development - I did not see a Needs section, please add that by the next submission. Your goals are good; I would recommend adding some specifics to your goals. For example, watch one YouTube video per week about SMART Board tools. That goal is specific in what you will do and the time period it will happen in.
 * Rules - I like that your last rule connects to the Word of the Week page. You might want to add a few sentences about why rules are necessary for a wiki.
 * Content Area Research - This is a very timely topic and you did a good job of identifying concerns for parents. I would suggest you include for the first one that you would provide a list of educational apps for parents so they have a better idea of what you are using and even a parent night where they could use the iPad with their child and see for themselves the educational value. The requirements state you must have a title and description for each widget (videos included); you will need to add that for your videos. The videos are a great addition though and a good way to show parents iPads being used.
 * Other -A calendar is a great resource for parents, I'm glad you chose to include one. I don't think you meant to have the last sentence on a line by itself, you should check on that. You might also consider adding a definition for the word of the week and an example of using it in a sentence.
 * Your page was STELLAR! : )

In order to address the changes that needed to be made, I altered my Wiki on June 27 and made the following corrections:
 * I took out the last line on my Class Calendar page.
 * On my Professional Development page, I added some of my personal Needs in my Goals area and made the goals a little more specific.
 * I added why rules were important to my Rules for Wiki page.
 * I added another idea for parents to my Suggestions tab on my Content Area Research page. I also added titles and descriptions to each of my videos.
 * I updated my Word of the Week and added a widget to see the definition of the word! :)
 * I added a Technology Reflections page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added a Collaborative Page where I asked others to post their favorite technology and how it could be useful in my classroom.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added pictures to every page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added Widgets and PDFs.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 140%;">Here is a summary of my second Wiki submission on July 2nd from Ms. Fike.

 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Home - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">PD - good, you might consider adding a little intro at the beginning of the page so parents would understand what this page is
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Rules - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Content Research - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Projects - good, I suggest using lines to separate each section clearly and adding a title to each section using the same formatting throughout. Also, make the changes to the podcast section as suggested in the comments of that project.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Revisions - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Technology Reflections - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Other - Calendar, good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Other - Word of the Week - the dictionary widget was a great solution to giving them the definition.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Widgets x6 - mario, map, calendar, youtube, mathman, dictionary, podcast
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Pictures 1 per page - good
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">PDF x3 - about me, iste, did I miss one? can't find the third
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Links x5 - Good. Be sure they all have a title and description of what the site is and why visit them. This includes the ones on your project page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Collaborative - good, since this would really be for kids you might give them examples of what technology is because they might not know that word but would know what you meant if you gave examples.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif; font-size: 140%;">In order to address the changes that needed to be made, I altered my Wiki on June 27 and made the following corrections:
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added the group YouTube video to my Projects page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added a TIP Project page that described 5 lessons over Nouns, Verbs, and Adjectives.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added a picture to my TIP page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I updated my Word of the Week and the PDF on that page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added a 3 paragraph reflection to my Professional Development page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">I added lines to my Projects page.